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Rain Storm....

01:36 Oct 26 2008
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Rain Storm

an impromptu poem

by Hawk O'Brian






Thunder crashes

splitting the silence like Samurai sword.....

Lightning fills the sky

stabbing at the darkness, driving it away.....



Rain pours down.....

punishing the ground without mercy.....

covering the asphalt

and mudding the dirt.



The sound of the glass

as Rain pounds against the windows....

echoes through the air

like a death breath....



The wind howls violently

bending the trees to its will....

forcing them to become

distorted and broken....



and now it is done.....

as quickly and fiercely as it attacked.....

it retreats once more.....

until it decides to return.



yes, I wrote this as you see it.... unpolished and spontaniously..... I hope you liked it.... :)


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VvvVampireKisses
VvvVampireKisses
07:13 Jun 01 2013

Nice.. the build up is really good !!








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