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Rain Storm....
01:36 Oct 26 2008
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Rain Storm
an impromptu poem
by Hawk O'Brian
Thunder crashes
splitting the silence like Samurai sword.....
Lightning fills the sky
stabbing at the darkness, driving it away.....
Rain pours down.....
punishing the ground without mercy.....
covering the asphalt
and mudding the dirt.
The sound of the glass
as Rain pounds against the windows....
echoes through the air
like a death breath....
The wind howls violently
bending the trees to its will....
forcing them to become
distorted and broken....
and now it is done.....
as quickly and fiercely as it attacked.....
it retreats once more.....
until it decides to return.
yes, I wrote this as you see it.... unpolished and spontaniously..... I hope you liked it.... :)
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VvvVampireKisses
07:13 Jun 01 2013
Nice.. the build up is really good !!